[ that smile looks off. it's the first thing ivan can think of once he sees it on keith's face, thinking it's wrong, it doesn't quite fit. he's so used to so many of keith's smiles that he can tell when one isn't as bright. he wants to know why this is the case. didn't keith tell him, promised him that he'll tell him what was bothering him?
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maybe he should use the direct approach. ]
... Then, what's wrong?